This poem is dedicated to friendship (in general) and my friends (in particular). If you read this poem, you would just know if I meant it for you. And if it is, trust me... I mean every word of it. A toast! Cheers! :)
The waves of my life are sweeping past
And the tempest echoes through my heart
The terror, the despair, the lonliness
were all wiped out with your mere presence.
Your worldly words I wisely weighed
I'm sure this does sound cliched
I faltered, I stumbled, I slip, I fell
You lived through me; experienced my hell.
And much later, when spring brought light
Life was bright with joy and delight
You were a prism for the light from heaven
splitting white into a colorful seven
You lifted me to the azure sky
Hence, though it rained, I was dry
Then I snuggled into a feathery cloud
In a state of bliss, I whistled aloud.
The birds flew, the wind blew
I was on top of the world
With the mist of joy, my head swirled.
For this heaven, I thank you
My friend, this poem is for you
who stood by me when I was pained
From you, there's a lot I've gained
Life is magical with a miracle like you.
10 comments:
i'm renderes speechless
truly amazing and touching poem
u rock!!! keep posting regularly..
the lows and downs in my life
are swept away far aside
when thee is there by my side
so here in peace i reside
thy name is pain not coz u pain
but in memory of what u've slain
:)
hey.. lovely poem.. (er.. thank you! ;) )
And wat a pleasant sight to see one poet comment on another! :)
thanx yaar :)
cheers!!
i really don't know what to say about this poem of urs coz i'm still lost..
all i can manage to 'comment' is that its beautiful..,and i'd like u to read ur poem once again from me to you..:)
ps-i actually had to switch off my ipod to read between the lines..;) and trust me,very few things get such undivided attention from me..(u'd know best..:D)
@ Gay, :) very nice poetry..but u r giving me a complex ;)
@ Adithi thanx
@ Ramya welcome
@ Cow er..obviously u'll b topping the list :) :D
Nice :) Straight from your heart I guess
You've been Tagged :)
Long TYm NO new posts coming up.. One more thing to ask.. Why did u deleted ur old posts and started writing new ones.. Even those were good..
@sebastian oops sorry.. haven't blogged in ages.. I dedicate the lizard 2 u :P
hey nice poetry! feels good to read these kind of things! carry on!
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